Friday, August 16, 2013

in which i continue to torment my characters

I've been writing quite a bit today. :) I'm quite pleased with my ability to ignore the siren call of video games thus far lol

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Asdelar saw him turn and come towards them, and read the
angry intent clear on his face. His eyes widened in alarm.
“Hinego, no!”

It was Nohls who saved him.

He'd lingered on the stairs, waiting for Hinego. When
he saw the Red make a move, he rushed down the steps and
seized the smaller man in a bear hug, effectively pinning
his arms.

Hinego fought back instinctively, but the Sergeant was in
full Banam-hin armor, and was practically crushing Hinego
to him, head tilted wisely back to avoid a skull cracking
into his nose.

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